segunda-feira, 7 de setembro de 2009

Persuasive writing

Writing English in a virtual space like a blog can be very beneficial to students' writing proficiency. According to Marcuschi (2004), students feel more challenged when they know that their compositions are not going to be read only by their teachers, but also by their classmates and everybody else that access the blog. Their writing will be exposed in the world wide web. Some people say that they feel embarrassed for writing in a place where everybody will see what they wrote, however students claim that when they have the chance to interact over the internet with other English speakers, they learn a great deal of vocabulary and expand their overall knowledge about the language. In conclusion, when students have the chance to relate with the language in an authentic way, they benefit more than those who don't.

8 comentários:

  1. Exercise is good for everybody, our organs work better when we do exercise, our health thanks. To walk is one of best exercises, a study done in the University of Harvard showed that this kind of activity reduces until 50% the risk of evil heart, prevent hypertension, the level of cholesterol, activate the sanguine circulation and reduce in 17% the infarct risk. In conclusion, all of us need to pratice exercise everyday, it's interesting and very important how the depressed people creat force and a new vitality through the exercise.

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  2. Some people think learning other languages is unnecessary, but I disagree. When you know and understand some languages you can travel and communicate on many places, read many kind of books and listen to with apprehension musics and conversations, especially, if you have learned english and spanish.
    There are many other reasons to learn idioms, but I won't express them because I believe that I could persuade who readed this writing. :D

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  3. The war always did part of the humankind history. The reasons for that are many. Economy, religious, territory and others. But the war is not necessary.
    If the people think with a good sense, they can see that the war just brings suffer and spend of money to rebuid the countries. And the problems are almost never conclued after.
    All the diligences can be resolved with the dialog. The diplomacy was created for this kind of situations.
    So, it's not too late to finish the conflicts. all the humankind is tired of violence. All that world has to do is promote the peace and solydarity.

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  4. Pretty people earns more, as the cientists say.

    Studies show that attractive students get more attention and higher grades from their teachers, good-looking patients get care with more 'attention' from their doctors, and handsome criminals receive lighter sentences than less attractive suspects.

    The ugly truth, as the economics professors Daniel Hamermesh of the University of Texas and Jeff Biddle of Michigan State University says, is that ugly or 'less-attractive' people earn 10 percent less than people of good looks, who earn 8 percent less than those who are good-looking.

    A London Guildhall University survey of 11.000 mid-aged people found that unattractive men earned 15 percent less than those more attractive, while unattractive women earned 11 percent less than the prettier ones.

    As theses studies says and as everybody says, I think I'll be a very rich guy, and it's not too difficult to understand why (laughing).

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  5. Music is the most interesting way to communicate everything you want. If you are a language teacher you can promote discussion among the students by listen to muusic, in addition to this, students can practice vocabulary, pronunciation, listening comprehension and much more abilities.

    In contemporaneous world there are many people working under pressure and in order to scape of this world, they have to appeal to any kind of art, for example, in the most of cases, these people spend their free time playing some instrument or singing on a band as a moment of relaxing. Another example is that some children learn to read and write helped by the music. Besides this, children are able to learn to count and pray through the music.

    According to experts, music has the power of accurate people's sensibility. It is true that a couple of psycological pathologies are treated by music therapy. No matter which kind of music you like, the important is to feel good vibrations caused by it.

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  6. Is many interesting that the people in general practice physical exercises at least three times a week.The exercises brings many beneficts for our body and for our mind.The exercises help people that surfer problems of hard,of depression,of panic, between others.
    Unhapply a big percentual the population not practice exercises contantly and have many ilness because of that.The people in general are many lazy.The exerciss are a good option for who want lost weight,especcialy the aerobics exercises.
    In a conclusion the exercises
    only brings beneficts for the humanity.

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  7. Nowadays, people tend to litter the street. They shouldn't do this because when the trash accumulates it impedes the water drain through the culvert what causes disasters in the city. Crashing cars and floods are some examples.

    Do you litter in your house? If the answer is no, why do you do that on the street? Some people say that they do this because there's no dump everywhere. The solution is: keep your trash with yourself until you find a dump.

    Searches verify that trash on the street attracts harmful animals that cause diseases and impedes the water drain through the culvert what causes flood. All of these problems would be avoided if people were educated and do to others what they want to themselves.

    In conclusion, take care of your city is take care of yourself.

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  8. Persuasive Way of Life: Be Happy.
    When you’re sad, you do people around you sad too. Sometimes the thing doesn’t happen like you would like that happened, but it’s a stage. Nothing is continuous bad, and nothing is continuous good. Sometimes you need to change some way to get the happiness.
    When you don’t have a job, you get sad looking for something to do. When you have a lot of job, you get tired looking for a break. Nothing too much is good, even staying in a rest.
    When you love someone, and you feel the same back, you are really lucky and happy, because the love fills an empty part of us, which need affection. So, if you don’t have anyone for loving in your heart, you also can be happy if you have good friends.
    Then, it’s up to you.

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